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Trying some more Digital Art..
Took me all day! The hair took especially long to do.. :3

Hope you like it..

She's an Angelspit fan! ^.^


From scratch in Painter X

Texture:
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Critiques


:iconrcwikkydartist:
Not bad for a digital piece. I like the detail and emphasis on the eyes and eyelashes. The design and coloring of the hair is very interesting, as though it represents you (since I have seen some of your photos on here). It would be a little more interesting to see her in full figure though, to see her cybergoth outfit. Her head seems to tell a lot though. I like the mask and her little necklace. The symbol on it is original and has a robotic/alien feel to it. I see you tried to give detail on her locks to look like real hair and I admire that effort. Nice job. :)
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Vision: This drawing conveys what is indented. I like that you have a style of drawing that is your own. I saw it in your other drawings in your gallery. The fact that you have drawn what you know is wonderful. Instead of trying to draw sweet delicate fairies you picked an image that represents yourself. The texture in the background, the makeup, hair and even the mask are all true to the lifestyle. This images expresses what you wanted it to say.

Originality: The style of drawing is original to who you are and to the skill level you are at. The subject matter is something that has been seen and done. It isn't one that has been over used too much in drawing but (no offense to your photos) I have seen tons of photos that are the same.

Technique: The way you draw is fresh. It shows no fear. I am not a big technical artist. I go with what I feel and know. And what I like. I like your shading in the hair, the eyes and the mask. I think you fell short with the shading on the body. You have put detention everywhere but the body and the face look flat. If you add shading around the face put deeper shadows where their should be, like on the neck, where the hair falls on the face and arms. Doing this I believe will make her feel more solid and will bring the image together as a whole.

Over all I like this. The colors and the idea behind it. Her eyes really do look as if they are looking into your soul... but not in an evil way. Keep it up!
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:iconnightrose64:
cute and cool :D i love the colors :D looks like a ninja :D

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:iconnightrose64:
your welcome Bittersweet ;) actually. i was thinking. do you mind if i put you down as one of my favorite artists/photographers on my page? :D

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Of course i don't mind! I'd be honored ^.^

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:iconnightrose64:
aww :D cool :D well. you are now in the "hall of fame" haha ;)

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hehe :dance: :boogie: :dance:

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:iconcorona2012:
I think you need to start with the structure of the face first then build on it from there, it will look more realistic even though it's more work and you're covering it up it's worth it. I like the shading and hair although I feel that you could improve the fringe by not making the perimiter as blunt, keep practising :)

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Angelspit FTW!


I like it, you got the gas mask really well. And I Love black and green mixtures like this. :) Good job.

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